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Re: Senryu  - Live Civility
Reply #4 - Sep 25th, 2011 at 1:59pm
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Terry,
This is good.  I liked it.
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Reply #3 - Nov 24th, 2010 at 2:19am
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Nas,

Thanks for the read.

Daniel,

Nice to see "you" again and your wit, as well.

I think listening to talk radio and watching both Fox and MSNBC makes
me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!thats where this piece came from...where is compromise.

Glad to see your back.

The JFK piece, beautiful.
  
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civility?
Reply #2 - Nov 9th, 2010 at 7:28pm
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or perhaps ?

precipitous
teetering indifference --
could Reason perish?


sLightly nudging over the edge, Daniel  Cool
  
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Reply #1 - Sep 23rd, 2010 at 6:34am
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I like this revision, though for the life of me I can't get my tongue round preciptously.
  
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Sep 16th, 2010 at 4:35pm
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                                     Precipitously
                           on the edge of indifference;
                                   reason perishes
                                
  
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