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Just_Daniel Topic Starter Ex Member Slow down; things will go faster. ~ djr	Ren... Reply #3 - Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am	Print Post
	duetsdove wrote on Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am: First of all. ..how could I not adore a work inspired by my absolute favourite poem -- The Road Not Taken. . .Frost (not of the winter type) does certainly inspire. . .and I'd say that I may see Stopping by Woods as well. . .perhaps. I know I've done two take-offs from Stopping by Woods, maybe three... but I didn't really think of that one with this... I just took off diverging from the two roads... of rhyming meter and free verse... and with a little rebellions humor for good measure ~ which I have a feeling he might have chuckled with me about. and what an interesting form. . .we have what I thought was going to be a sonnet. . .which stops after the third quatrain. . .and the couplet become a couplet of different forms. . .haiku and cinquain. . . quite so! Correct! This is so cool, Daniel. . .I'm going to read it over a few more times. . .though I'm sure I'll have little to offer structure-wise. . . Enjoyed! ~Rene~ Please don't sell yourself short re structrue. You're right up there with the best of them... when you venture into it! I'll be happy to have you share any impressions you have of this one after you've done those further readings. deLighting that you've shared so far, Daniel 8)


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D. Allen Jenkins Ex Member All I got was a rock	Re: Erode... Naught Taken Reply #2 - Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am	Print Post
	The Error Road Taken I took a single road that split in two directions; all at once I found myself where now I sit with torn hamstrings and a dunce hat sitting atop my head. © D. Allen Jenkins Treading lightly, Doug


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duetsdove Ex Member	Re: Erode... Naught Taken Reply #1 - Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am	Print Post
	First of all. ..how could I not adore a work inspired by my absolute favourite poem -- The Road Not Taken. . .Frost (not of the winter type) does certainly inspire. . .and I'd say that I may see Stopping by Woods as well. . .perhaps. and what an interesting form. . .we have what I thought was going to be a sonnet. . .which stops after the third quatrain. . .and the couplet become a couplet of different forms. . .haiku and cinquain. . . This is so cool, Daniel. . .I'm going to read it over a few more times. . .though I'm sure I'll have little to offer structure-wise. . . Enjoyed! ~Rene~


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Just_Daniel Topic Starter Ex Member Slow down; things will go faster. ~ djr	Erode... Naught Taken Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am	Print Post
	Erode... Naught Taken I have walked two roads as I’ve scribbled verse; they converge as one in yon yellowed wood. If I’d chosen the other, would I be the worse? Have I looked down the one as far as I could? I’d spent precious time in the undergrowth of the wanderlust path, and I got nowhere, so I reasoned I’d rhyme, taking something of both to discover perchance what each sought to share. Some traveler friends bid farewell as I strode, but cautiously, marching a shadowy path to somewhere or other past empty abodes — encountered cold shoulders… occasional wrath. passers-by poked fun throughout a fallen winter; still life sprang anew two trails diverged from woods in pungent yellow streams; so I set a new course through trees relieved © MLee Dickens’son 09 Feb 2006 a musing from Robert Frost's The Road Not Taken
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