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D. Allen Jenkins Topic Starter Ex Member All I got was a rock	Re: Tishrei 10 ( A Journal Entry) Reply #4 - Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am	Print Post
	Norm, Rene, nas; Thanks for stopping by. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on this one. nas, excellent insight. Look further. Doug
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nas Ex Member I love YaBB 1G - SP1!	Re: Tishrei 10 ( A Journal Entry) Reply #3 - Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am	Print Post
	Hi Doug Like Norm, your title intrigued me. 10 Tishri of course is Yom Kippur. You link in to the story of the binding of Isaac, which is read on Rosh Hashanah when the shofar is blown to open the gates of heaven and the ten days of awe begin. They are closed with the blowing of the shofar again at the end of Yom Kippur and judgement has been made as to who will be inscribed in the book of life. I like the way you bring lamb and sheep into the poem. Abraham's faith in God was so strong that he was willing to sacrifice his son Isaac till he is stopped at the last minute and a ram appears and is sacrificed instead.


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duetsdove Ex Member	Re: Tishrei 10 ( A Journal Entry) Reply #2 - Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am	Print Post
	What can I say, Doug. . .it scans very well for me. . .though I'm no meter maid you know. lolol I enjoyed the read. . .and will look forward to Norm's crit and the discussion of the work. ~Ren~


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Normpo Forum Administrator Offline Posts: 10834 Joined: Aug 2^nd, 2003	Re: Tishrei 10 ( A Journal Entry) Reply #1 - Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am	Print Post
	Doug, I popped in here and saw "Tishrei" ans thought, "What is Doug doing writing about a Hebrew month?" I'll get back to this one for a "real" crit I enjoyed the read. Norm


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D. Allen Jenkins Topic Starter Ex Member All I got was a rock	Tishrei 10 ( A Journal Entry) Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am	Print Post
	Tishrei 10 (A Journal Entry) Obedience obeys compulsion’s call to humbleness, humiliating pride, as sheepishly one blameless takes the fall to resurrect the hope that Death has died. The joy that lay ahead provided all the motivation needed to endure the crosswinds blowing from a hellish squall, which sought impedance, through a sepulcher, of love’s advancement toward the ancient walls imprisoning the captives thought as free. The scapegoat is released! The sacred law is now fulfilled—the soul finds purity! The guilt of conscience now is on the lam; the shofar sounds my freedom, thus I am! © D. Allen Jenkins


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