EH? BE Normal? Si !   
    
A thing cain't be repeated twice… until   
ya says it first a second time... but then   
who listens to my babblin' on with swill   
'bout technicalities? … this blue Light pen    found the enjambment bumpy  
th't spills more ink th'n ever Sonnet Bill   
'ould use ta write a play with more cayenne   
th'n all my bland an' soggy stuff... a pill    can't quite figure what you're after with "a pill that's hard ta swaller ??
that's hard ta swaller... an' I hear "Amen!"     does "ta" get an apostrophe -- ta'  -- not sure
there spoutin' from the gallery.  I will   
be done with this... an' not repeat agin   
... until I say it twice fer overkill   
as all yer glares 'n' frowns crawls up me skin.   
    
     Correctness ain't the stuff o' mice or men   
     ... but what's before my ears... well, that's my ken. 
     
  I feel like I am in very good company here (my name is in the title and within the sonnet we have Will Shalespeare, John Steinbeck and Daniel Ricketts --- I feel blessed! Thank you, Daniel. This poem ain't know swill, though. It is strong in its wit and message.
   
  This is also had me flashing back to "Young Frankenstein" and A.B. Normal 
   
  I enjoyed this though I am not sold on what your real intent was here --- message-wise.
   
  Norm

Daniel

a name by any other name is just a name
and as for me, just call me Wayne.

writer

writer wrote on Jan 1^st, 1970 at 12:00am:

Well, I note that you've actually gone and DONE it... spilling out 6 or so sonnets all strung together.  I am planning to go visit them, though I don't get down to the epic section very often.  I promise I'll visit, just for you...  IF you tell me what your name is.  I don't wanna keep referring to you as 'writer'... though you're certainly a good one... and so is your offspring (whose name I also don't know yet)!

I've altered your excellent suggestion slightly, so Thank you!

deLightin' in the interchange, Daniel  8)

Daniel,

how about :

"EH? BE Normal? See?"

I'm going to have to try a sonnet. Always have been intimidated by the very idea, mostly because Ol' Bill did so well with them.

nicely done.

writer

Dani'l,

Delightful, as always. I must have read this after you made the change to L12, because I didn't see any problem with it myself. 

Doug

This is of course very clever, as I expect from you Daniel. Line 12 feels weak to me though. Feels like rhyme for rhymes sake. Also I am not sure but it seems like it is the wrong end rhyme (the others alternate) but you are the "form" master and I will concede that this is probably correct anyway.

A,B in your title is clever. Wish you could work the C/see in there too.

Repeated twice - you are so right, it has to be repeated once first! Very humorous and enjoyable sonnet.