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Re: Untitled #3 (and Water Tower challenge)
Reply #12 - Jun 8th, 2008 at 2:05pm
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Nice to see this pop up. . .I tend to focus more on the "feet" of the tree as well. . .and then my eye is led back to the tree behind and on the right. . .that seems a shadow of the first. . .

Looks like a lovely park!

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Reply #11 - Jun 8th, 2008 at 4:31am
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DianeEsk wrote on Jun 6th, 2008 at 4:59am:
I love this photo. The clarity and detail are quite amazing, the subject is simple but very interesting, it looks a little like some type of creatures feet to me.


Thanks, Diane. I see what you mean, though sometimes I try not to "see" too much if I take such photos lest I impinge too much on other people's imaginations. Obviously the "eye" was a first, but beyond that it was mostly letting only a compositional eye shape the picture (that and trying to keep people and artificial distractions out of the way, not completely successfully.

Melody Dancer wrote on Jun 6th, 2008 at 4:12pm:
Wow powerful shot...I like the color...I'm not sure about cropping it though, I like the idea of it watching and I think that works better when there is more in the picture for it to watch...
To me it looked like the profile of a squid!!!!
very cool Smiley


Thanks, Melody Dancer. I have a certain group of acquaintances who would be tickled green by you seeing a squid in this. I know I am. I too have decided my personal preference is for the wider framing rather than cropping the image, so we share the same thought (scary, hey? Wink ).

nas wrote on Jun 6th, 2008 at 7:09pm:
Hi Claw

I like the colour and the way the sun peeps from behind.  It is almost like an elephant or dinosaur leg but the eye in the trunk is unnerving, maiking it feel more like a creature crouching, watching.


Yes, some (but only a few) of the marks are man-made, either knife-graffiti or just damage (this is in a busy city park). I had images in my mind's eye of someone going to carve their "AB [heart]s YZ", and that "eye" suddenly opening on them. The rest of the story almost writes itself. Smiley

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The tree behind is much more disturbing.  The central limb looks like an elongated face with genitalia pointing out of an open mouth.


O...kay.  Huh

Actually, seriously, I can't really see where you mean, nor the image-within that you see. You might have to point it out a bit. I am not surprised though. It's a bit like cloud-visions - once you see one "rabbit" in the sky, well, to sing along with and paraphrase Bobby Darrin, "Pretty soon you got a sky full of rabbits!"".

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Ok, I'll just slip away quietly.  Don't want to wake the monsters.


The monsters aren't sleeping; they're just having a respite from participation...but watching. Wink

prosaic wrote on Jun 7th, 2008 at 8:52am:
Ah,

Thanks Nas.

Hello then to Claw.


Hello then to Prosaic.

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Yes, looks like the underbelly of a dinosaur to me, too.


"Underbelly of the Dinosaur" sounds like the wonderful title of something, Prosaic. Perhaps something you haven't written yet. Smiley

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Fascinating image. Where was it taken, please?


I can show you on a map:

http://maps.google.com.au/maps?f=q&hl=en&geocode=&q=Hyde+Park,+Sydney&sll=-33.86...

Where the "A" marker is, if you walk north along the white path, then it is towards, and looking towards, the north end of the green triangle on your left, before the point where all eight paths converge. Zooming out  (and perhaps hitting the "Satellite" button) will help identify its location  to other city landmarks.

Thank you all for reappraising this (with special notice of you, Diane, for bumping it back up). I am most grateful.

Claw
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Re: Untitled #3 (and Water Tower challenge)
Reply #10 - Jun 7th, 2008 at 8:52am
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Ah,

Thanks Nas.

Hello then to Claw.

Yes, looks like the underbelly of a dinosaur to me, too.

Fascinating image. Where was it taken, please?

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Reply #9 - Jun 7th, 2008 at 5:27am
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Claw is still around P.  I think there was a problem with his log-in at one time.
  
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Reply #8 - Jun 7th, 2008 at 12:18am
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Since Claw is no longer a member and this image was posted four years ago, I do not think s/he will be able to see any comments.

However, I agree with the creature's legs comments and the "eye" is very strange. But I see Nas has seen something extra too!

Did the name "Claw" come about as a result of this picture? I wonder.

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Reply #7 - Jun 6th, 2008 at 7:09pm
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Hi Claw

I like the colour and the way the sun peeps from behind.  It is almost like an elephant or dinosaur leg but the eye in the trunk is unnerving, maiking it feel more like a creature crouching, watching.

The tree behind is much more disturbing.  The central limb looks like an elongated face with genitalia pointing out of an open mouth.   

Ok, I'll just slip away quietly.  Don't want to wake the monsters.
  
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Reply #6 - Jun 6th, 2008 at 4:12pm
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Wow powerful shot...I like the color...I'm not sure about cropping it though, I like the idea of it watching and I think that works better when there is more in the picture for it to watch...
To me it looked like the profile of a squid!!!!
very cool Smiley
  
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Re: Untitled #3 (and Water Tower challenge)
Reply #5 - Jun 6th, 2008 at 4:59am
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I love this photo. The clarity and detail are quite amazing, the subject is simple but very interesting, it looks a little like some type of creatures feet to me.
  
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Reply #4 - May 18th, 2007 at 11:27pm
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this pic is inspiring something..and is totally awesome. Thanks for sharing.
  
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Reply #3 - Mar 11th, 2006 at 8:25am
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I love the picture, it makes me want to go for a walk in the woods.  The tree also makes me think of an elephants foot.  The color is perfect for that.  Or maybe it's a cyclops with its one eye watching the world!  lol
  
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Reply #2 - Nov 25th, 2005 at 6:54am
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This is a wonderful tree, I think either B&W or color is fine, but why not isolate it and crop all of the other stuff out of the photo?  I think that a tight close-up would be very powerful.    Joe 


G'day Joe,

I very much appreciate your point. That feedback is something that I desired, as I had a slight dilemma of choice in relation to this photo...

Yes, I experimented with isolation at the time of taking the photo, and also simply cropping the above. A crop to isolate the tree works for me, as you suggest, but I also liked the balance created on the right side with that blurred background tree a tad better. For me, the context of the "eye" of the tree amongst others helped spread the idea that there were more "watchers". It was a difficult choice - the background overall has a distracting "busy-ness" to it, and that background tree has a pipe running up it (I'm not sure if that's obvious - it is to me, because I know it's there). On the other hand, I like the slightly more expanded composition of the major elements in this, as opposed to the simpler composition of isolation. Thus, the aforementioned dilemma...

One thing I've subsequently thought about is actually arranging this, and four or five other crops and details that I took, into a bigger frame, all to grab the whole scene as "felt". A non-uniform arrangement of these elements (not lined up, and of different dimensions - eg. portrait and landscape of different sizes) is what I've had in mind.

Of course then I move on to other things and such "projects" get left behind on the tail end of a thousand newer photos. ~sigh~

Thanks, Joe. It's good to get some action going in this particular forum.

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Re: Untitled #3 (and Water Tower challenge)
Reply #1 - Nov 24th, 2005 at 8:44pm
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This is a wonderful tree, I think either B&W or color is fine, but why not isolate it and crop all of the other stuff out of the photo?  I think that a tight close-up would be very powerful.    Joe
  
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Untitled #3 (and Water Tower challenge)
Jun 7th, 2004 at 12:10pm
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Okay, as with the other images, any criticism is welcome:

http://www.normpo.com/~Claw/tree.jpg

(some colour for a change - I took it intending B&W, but I think it works better as colour)

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